Friday, November 18, 2016

Literacy blogpost 2016

Hi guys and welcome back to my blog I will be blogging about literacy
Here's my writing:
                             
 Retell




There once lived a factory called the storks.They deliver babies. Humans send letters to the storks so they can care for it and love it.the storks put the letters in a big jar that goes through a machine and then out comes the baby. But now they don’t do that any more because it was getting to hard for them. They started giving out packages for the humans. Humans send letters to the storks what they need. After awhile they started deriving babies again. There is a boy called Nate he wrote a letter to the storks for a baby boy  he had really busy parents. He started making a set play thing so they can bring the baby in play set. 


So it could be happy when it comes. After a while the police came with a piece of paper saying to knock down the play set and that the storks have stopped the baby delivery. So then after the storks came with the baby he go a baby girl when he was suppose to get a boy instead . 
  It was so cute. she was so happy to see her family 
And she cried when she saw her family she laughed.     


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